Wednesday, October 17, 2018

Due Friday, October 19th - "Beloved" by Toni Morrison, pages 1-33

Overview: Toni Morrison on the writing process and inception of Beloved, stated, ''I was amazed by this story I came across about a woman called Margaret Garner who had escaped from Kentucky, I think, into Cincinnati with four children; and she was a kind of cause celebre among abolitionists in 1855 or '56…I found an article about her in a magazine of the period, and there was this young woman in her 20's, being interviewed - oh, a lot of people interviewed her, mostly preachers and journalists, and she was very calm, she was very serene. They kept remarking on the fact that she was not frothing at the mouth, she was not a madwoman, and she kept saying, 'No, they're not going to live like that. They will not live the way I have lived.’ A desire to invent. Now I didn't do any more research at all about that story. I did a lot of research about everything else in the book - Cincinnati, and abolitionists, and the underground railroad - but I refused to find out anything else about Margaret Garner. I really wanted to invent her life."


Directions: Read Beloved, pages 1-33. Next, compose a blog response using the names or symbolic moments below as the catalyst for your analysis on the reading. Please use direct evidence from the text and respond to each other. Get a conversation going. I look forward to your responses.

Characters

  • Sethe 
  • Paul D 
  • Baby Suggs 
  • Howard and Buglar 
  • Denver 
  • Beloved 
  • Halle 
  • Sixo 
  • Paul A and Paul F 
  • Amy Denver 
  • Mr. Garner 
  • Mrs. Garner 
  • Schoolteacher 
  • Sethe’s mother 

Symbolic Moments
  • 124 
  • Ten minutes for seven letters. 
  • Chokecherry tree. 
  • “They took my milk.” 
  • Tobaco tin. 
  • Brother. According to Paul D, why is it better than Sethe’s? 
  • Cornfield. How loose the silk….. How jailed down the juice….

Further Reading: Baldwin, Adichie, & Morrison

From Goodreads, ordered lists of major works by the authors we have explored thus far.  I highly recommend The Fire Next Time and Go Tell it on the Mountain by James Baldwin.  Enjoy.


James Baldwin

https://www.goodreads.com/list/show/10683.Best_of_James_Baldwin






Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie

https://www.goodreads.com/list/show/73931.Best_of_Chimamanda_Ngozi_Adichie

Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie




Toni Morrison

https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/3534.Toni_Morrison

Toni Morrison

Wednesday, October 10, 2018

Due Tuesday, October 16th – Post Baldwin Essays & Prepare for Seminar

Overview: We worked through the writing process together, and it is time to submit a “draft” of your essay. I use the word draft, because writing is never truly finished. This is the most publishable piece you can provide at this time. We will be returning to this essay in the future, but for now, I would like to use these pieces as means of launching an informed discussion about the literature we have read thus far.

Directions:

1) Complete your essay and submit a copy on Turnitin.com

2) In this blog space, please post your introductory paragraph and thesis as a means of sharing your finalized concepts with the class. Of course, you are free to tweak and refine it as an abstract, as it will need to stand alone as a thesis. We will have a discussion and seminar on Tuesday.

Tuesday, October 9, 2018

Due Wednesday, October 9th - First Body Paragraph

Directions:  In this space, post your most refined body paragraph and we will give feedback on grammar and style.

During our unit on Toni Morrison's Beloved, we will watch 13th, a documentary about the 13th amendment and the aftermath of slavery to the present.  See the interview with film director Ava DuVernay and Oprah Winfrey, below.


With a Little Help from Our Friends

Overview:  Before an essay exists, perhaps we could give each other a hand.  This will be a live blog during today's class.  I will join as well. 😉

Directions:  1)  Post your concept.  This may be your freewriting ideas, your working thesis statements, whatever would give your classmates enough info to follow your working argument.  Add your first 2-3 quotations to help us see the moves you want to make in the opening body paragraphs.  Finally, explain where you want to end.  What's your point?  If you do not have an answer to any of the above, let us know so we can help you.  3) Read each other's responses and give helpful feedback.  Let's see if we can divide an conquer.  Everyone pair up and help.  When you finish, choose another to add feedback.

Homework:  Post your first body paragraph.  We will work on grammar and style.




Thursday, October 4, 2018

Baldwin Study Materials for Essay

I Am Not Your Negro study guide with essays and background material on Baldwin, Malcolm X, Medgar Evers, and Martin Luther King.
http://www.magpictures.com/iamnotyournegro/images/share/educational/curriculum.pdf

I Am Not Your Negro transcript: 
https://www.springfieldspringfield.co.uk/movie_script.php?movie=i-am-not-your-negro

"Sonny Blues" Quotations:
https://www.goodreads.com/work/quotes/370824-sonny-s-blues-by-james-baldwin---penguin-60-s-series

"Recitatif" Critical Essay:
http://franklinscourses.pbworks.com/f/Recitatif%2BCritical%2BJSTOR%2BEssay.pdf




Ten Steps to Writing an Effective Essay & Thesis Statement Templates


        1.      Read and Read and Read Prompt:  Whatever you choose, make sure to think about every facet of the question.  Read over and over again.  Think.  Digest what you are about to accomplish.

        2.      Return to the text.  Return to your blog responses, journal, and class notes.  Go back and look your work again with the prompt in mind. How is everything new now that you are seeing the plays with the prompt in mind? 

        3.      Rehearse.  What?  Yes!  Rehearse and perform a verbal essay using the prompt and the works.  How would you address a jury of your peers with you proposed thesis?  What evidence would you use?

        4.      Find your Evidence:  Find and cite valuable passages for each of the parts of the above prompt.  Go to the net and cut and paste at least 10-12 passages and or quotations to use in your piece into a word document.

        5.      So what’s your point?  Thesis statement:  The questions in the prompt are guiding your essay. Look at your 10 major passages and ask yourself…what message am I taking away from this reading experience?  Write a solid one sentence thesis statement of purpose.

       6.      Organization:  Look at the list of quotations and organize the quotations into the paragraphs.  DO NOT BE AFRAID TO JUMP AROUND.  JUMP AROUND.  JUMP UP, JUMP UP AND GET DOWN!

        7.      Your thesis and 10 Quotations.  Your complete thesis is the heading and the 10 quotations should be arranged in the order you would use them in your argument.

        8.      Compose body paragraphs:  Using the prompt and your accompanying quotations - start writing your essay.  Make sure you come to some sort of conclusion in the third paragraph.  You may even have a brief conclusion as another paragraph.

       9.      Read your essay over: The professor’s eyes should not be the first set of eyes to read your essay.  Make sure it is solid.  Read it out loud. 

       10.   Compose your introduction:  Keep it brief and make sure the thesis statement you wrote is the last sentence.

Thesis Statement Templates


Prose/Open Response Example #1: 

              (Insert author’s name) presents readers with _________________________ as a means of __________________________.  Through the use of __________________________, ____________________________, and _________________________ he/she demonstrates the necessity for human beings to ________________________.  However, this becomes more complicated because___________________________.  Therefore, (Insert author’s name) uses ________________________ to make his/her point that in order to ____________________ one must ___________________________.


Prose/Open Response Example #2: 

              In the art of fiction, an author may choose to utilize (insert literary device) as a means of ________________________________.  (Insert author’s name) takes this device to another level in _____________________________ by revealing  _____________________________ through the use of _________________________.  Through the course of the novel/play, ____________________________________.  However, by the end of the work ___________________ ________________. Therefore, (insert author’s name) utilizes (insert literary device) to make the point _________________________________________________.


Prose/Open Response Example #3: 

              Often novelists/playwrights _________________________________.  However, (insert author’s name) chooses to ______________________________________ in his her novel/play ____________________________ in order to reveal _________________________________________ about (insert theme).  While on the surface it may appear _________________________, by the end of the work, (insert author’s name) proves __________________
______________________________.  Therefore, ______________________________________________________________________.


Poetry Example #1: 

              A poet may choose to utilize (insert literary device) as a means of describing the complex feelings attached to________________________________.  (Insert author’s name) takes this device to another level in _____________________________ by revealing  _____________________________ through the use of _________________________.  On one level, the poet reveals ____________________________________.  However, the use of (insert literary device) also brings out the paradoxical feelings of ________________________________. Therefore, _______________________________________________________________________.


Poetry Example #2: 

              A poet may choose to utilize (insert literary device) as a means of describing the complex feelings attached to________________________________.  (Insert name of poet #1) takes this device to another level in _____________________________ by revealing  _____________________________ through the use of _________________________.  (Insert name of poet #2) also tackles this notion, yet utilizes (insert literary device) in order to describe _____________________________________________.  On one level, both poets reveal ____________________________________.  However, when one examines ______________________________ one will notice the paradoxical feelings of ________________________________. Therefore, while (poet #1 ) describes _________________________________________________, (poet #2) reveals that what really counts is _____________________________.


Due Wednesday, May 22nd - Farewell Blog

Dear Scholars, With the year coming to a close, I would like to say how proud I am of all of you, and everything you accomplished this pa...